15A

Video Drafts

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Everyone's draft in class had a creative idea. No ones was the same. Although they were all good and creative they all were lacking college level thinking. Some videos had typos and others didn't relate to their topic. I learned to put in more skits that explain the problem. I want there to be more skits and to make the video but I have to make sure I give a college level solution to the problem.

The video as to have a little humor in it but still be a college level project. All the videos that made everyone laugh were the ones with the positive feedback. Everyone wanted to watch my video a second time. I know that humor had to be a part of it. Although that was just the introduction I know the rest of the video has to be very informing. 

To the revision I will include three short skits to present the problems. After presenting the problems I will search a solution or interview and RA or a hall director. Also maybe look up the statistics of how many people in college switch their roommate at any time in the year.

Another thing people told me to add were bloopers. They always lighten up the mood of the video at the end. I want to make it memorable and fun. The statistics might be hard to find but it's manageable. Also I have to make catches people's attention from the second it starts. I don't viewer to be bored.